Matt Bellamy

I thought I had already critiqued this...hmm. Anyway, the concept is good, and relatable, but not very well-written. The repetition of I hate...was too much. And yellow was very random. ...

This was rather nice but to be honest, I skipped the second half because it was so long, and seemed to drag out. I think you could say all you ...

Yes, the rhyming scheme is good, and yes, the writing itself is not bad. However, I find the rhyming scheme a little too light-hearted for this subject. The tone just...doesn't ...

Someone once said, if a poem only has three good lines, it should only be three lines long. I think the repeated End my... is filler. It adds nothing to ...

This was okay. I'm not sure what you mean by "no breaks" though - it sounds a little like you wrote this just for the sake of rhyming, which rarely ...

Morgan! :) Haven't seen you around for a while. Beautifully written. I love your voice, if you know what I mean? The way you capture the scene...it's just great. Also, ...

I really like the way you described winter in this piece, I could imagine it all. However, I had a bit of a problem with it - it just doesn't ...

She tore her puppy in half? :-O Not a bad attempted at a limerick, really. But is this a real puppy we're talking about? This is quite alarming! Hehe, perhaps ...

I like this. I don't like how you capitalized every word, but I like the format, which seems to resemble rain falling. A comma or two here and there wouldn't ...

Hmm, this is good, I just think a few things need to be reworded, and I'm not quite sure how. :? I think you could omit "just" from the second ...

I've just had a look through and pointed out some suggestions that might make your poem sound a little better - no particular reason for some of these, just what ...

Adorable, a very loveable poem, and the dog sounded lovely. Some of the rhyming sounded a little forced, like "the way he'd never fail" - what does that mean? Also, ...

Haha, very cute! I don't think you need the - in Willie in the limerick, and I'd also suggest saying something like "And take a big bite" to make it ...

This is cute, although a little too simple. However, it is so short and simple that I think you could turn it into a haiku if you wanted. In case ...

I didn't think, just glancing at the second stanza, that I would like it, but I do. I really like the way it sounds, almost like it should be in ...